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Characters: Tony
Tony - [http://mix-o-freak.deviantart.com/art/BM-Comic-Ref-OC-Tony-74798579]
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Comic 03: WD-40? (4 panels)
Panel 1: (2/5 w; 1/4 h; set top left; bleed left only; seen from the front with nothing else in view.)
The door opens with a creak. Barely see anything inside except the light streaming in the foyer, with Tony's shadow on the floor, but his body out of the panel.
SFX: Creaking Noise
Panel 2: (2/3 w; 1/4 h; set top right; bleed right and top; seen from inside the foyer looking out at the door [near left side].)
Mostly shadow, no lighting sources (except the moonlight coming in from the door) visible in the panel, but there is a slight bit of light visible on right side (light source is about three feet to right). Tony's silhouette is peering in.
Tony: “Um..."
Tony: "Hello?”
Panel 3: (2/3 w; 1/3 h; offset to the left; no bleed; layered under panel 4; seen from side, with clockwise rotation and slightly downward angle.)
Tony is looking around the candlelit main foyer, facing currently to the right of the door (readers' left). Perspective-wise, there is a lamp three feet away from the door on both sides. In the shadows Eve's body should be visible, but not distinct. Not a silhouette though.
Panel 4: (1/2 w; 2/5 h; offset to the left, even more than panel 3; bleed bottom; layered over the bottom of panel 3; front perspective, no rotation or angling.)
Tony is in the foreground chewing on his nails and looking extremely nervous. Behind him and to the right is Eve, carrying an unlit lamp.
Eve: “Hello.”
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Previous page [[link] Next page [link] ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Okay, here it is! This is the second "final draft" script that I'm uploading to dA for my comic, Bloodstone Manor. It is a horror/humor/drama/supernatural/action teen manga that I have been doing work on for over five years. I have attempted to illustrate it myself twice (With horrible results. There's a reason I'm a writer primarily, and a concept artist secondarily...), and have it illustrated by another three times. All with no success due to lack of motivation and dedication to creating the comic. One of my goals in life is to have this entire series (which I estimate would be at *least* fifteen hundred pages) illustrated and printed in at least one copy per volume that I could have on my shelf. I'd be ecstatic if it were adapted into an anime and/or picked up by a major manga publisher, but all I'm aiming for is to get it finished and looking professional, even if no one else cares. I'm not going to say that every single element in the story is original, that I haven't drawn from a lot of influences. I KNOW I've drawn from so many hundreds that even I can't tell what influenced a particular deviation I made in the storyline. I'm not going to say it'll be a masterpiece, or even profitable. But I can guarantee that if it gets finished people*will* enjoy it immensely. The eventual team I hope to pull together would consist of: Writer - Me, obviously since it's my story. XD Storyboard/Layout artist - To speed up the transition from script to illustration. Penciller - To do the major page illustrations. Inker - To do the inking/lineart of the pencils in preparation for... Toner/Colorist - To tone the main comic pages and covers as well as color the covers. Webmaster - To control the website it's information and pages would be hosted on. |
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